Evaluation Q3

What have you learned from your audience feedback.

After having a audience review our 1st draft of our music video we learnt that in the chorus instead of having angry images behind our singer we should possibly have more narrative of her bad day.With the influence of the original artist we have decided to replace the angry pictures with ones of her falling down, things spilling on her , her walking into doors, tights ripping and various bad situations that are common in everyday life.

we also got told that we should try and include more visual slap stick and possibly re look at filming our tricaster scenes again as some of the lip sync was out of time. We also got suggested that we should try and use different angles in the office shots so we are looking into ways we can change that.

However on the positive side, we achieved our target of making the audience laugh and the narrative scenes with the speech bubbles worked well, they thought we used a variety of shots aswell as havign accurate and engaging lipsyncing with a original concept. with these suggestions in mind we started to work on the final touches of our music video and decdied to put the changes into practice by changing the angry images to ones of our performer having a bad day and captioning them.